letter+to+improve

26.11.08

Deer Students of Year 5 and 6,

Thank you for the writing you did last week it was very good and I thougt you did well I have assessed it all and I have gave you all target to help you to get better.

Sadly my own writing is not getting any better I am woried that I shall be sack if i dont do better soon

Your frendly teacher,